Comments on: Hope http://poetry.unclesol.net/hope Original Poetry by Carlton Lloyd Smith Fri, 05 Mar 2010 15:10:13 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Charlie http://poetry.unclesol.net/hope/comment-page-1#comment-2 Charlie Tue, 10 Feb 2009 14:28:55 +0000 http://poetry.unclesol.net/?p=7#comment-2 I love it. Trying to figure out what I love about it - it has a flow and the flow is interupted by the italicized words, and yet those interuptions contribute to the flow. I think I also really like the alliteration; I'm a sucker for that. "sings softly" and "quiet carrion meandering." I love it. Trying to figure out what I love about it – it has a flow and the flow is interupted by the italicized words, and yet those interuptions contribute to the flow.

I think I also really like the alliteration; I’m a sucker for that. “sings softly” and “quiet carrion meandering.”

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